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Part 2


"Oh no!" Peach thought, "If they find me awake then I'll be chained up!"
Person 2: Do you think any of the prisoners have waken up yet?
Person 1: Well, of course one of them has! I can sence it.
"Once again... oddly familiar.." Peach thought
Just then, there was some grunting. Peach turned around and Samus was waking up.
Person 1: Let's see... The key for Cell 2, Cell 3, 4, 5, 6... Where's the key for Cell 1!?
Person 2: You ate it..
Person 1: Oh... right... let's see here... Cell 2 key.
The cell door slid open, and two shady figures walked in. Peach thought one could be Bowser, do to it's body shape, but was mistaken when she heard it talk. Peach knew who the midget was: FAWFUL!
Peach: Quick Samus! Lay on the ground someone's coming!
Samus: Ugh! Oh...
Fawful: Midbus! Are these prisoners still in my trance?
Midbus: No Fawful. They are not!
"How could they have found out...?" Peach thought about it for a few seconds.. "We're not glowing!"
Fawful: Get the chains ready.
Midbus then walked out the door. And just when she thought it was safe... Peach got up, only to see that Fawful was right there.
Peach: Whoa!
Midbus then walked in the door, holding a bunch of chains and a box.
Fawful: Do it!
Midbus, so quick as though it was magic, wrapped those chains around Peach, then more chains around Samus.
Fawful: Didn't you forget something...
Midbus: Oh! Right!
Midbus then put her hand in the box and pulled out tape and blind-folds.
Peach:Uh Oh...
Samus, now fully gained consiousness, struggled to get free
Samus: Hey.. What gives buster!
Fawful: Can you just put them on?
Midbus ripped a piece of tape off of the roll, and stuck it to Peach's mouth.
Peach: Mph! Mmph!!
Fawful: Oh shut it blondie!
Midbus ripped another piece off the roll and stuck it to Samus' mouth. Then put blind-folds on both of them.
Fawful: Okay Midbus.. strap them in...
Peach felt herself tilting backwards and her arms and legs being stretched. Then when she thought it couldn't hurt anymore, she got cuffed, not hand-to-hand, but hand-to-opposite foot. Slowly she fainted due to the pain..

Samus, also cuffed has not giving up. She kept squirmiang, trying to get free, but nothing was working. Slowly, Samus realized, that every time she struggled, the chains got tighter! But that wasn't going to stop her! She kept struggling until, the three chains on Samus' neck, forced her to faint too.

Fawful: Ready?
Midbus: Ready master!
Fawful: Heh! Heh! I HAVE CHORTLES!!
Slowly, Midbus put some strange collars on Peach and Samus. The one peach got was metal with red blinking lights and the one Samus got was similar, except it had orange binking lights.
Midbus: Ahh! Not-so perfect fit!
Fawful: Now for the Mind Badges!
Midbus pulled out these two mechanical faces (of Fawful) and put them on top of other logos they had on thier clothes. Peach's jewel and the little icon on Samus. Slowly, something happened to the two girls. A strange power over came them. Peach's dress slowly became black, and the fluffy part came off to reveal a ninja-like outfit with grey boots. The same happened to Samus. Once that had fully overcame them, from under their hair came two ninja masks.

Peach squirmed back and forth in her sleep, her mind getting clouded. She couldn't think at all. She slowly awakened, not fully hypnotised but hypnotised enough to say these words:
"I MUST OBEY LORD FAWFUL. LORD FAWFUL I MUST OBEY".
A little  bar on the wall behind them said how much they have been hypnotised, that's the only thing that Fawful and Midbus was paying attention to. The bar kept inching it's way forward on Peach, but for Samus, it was going really slowly.
PEACH:
25%, 35%, 50%, 56%, 68%, 77%, 84%, 90%.

SAMUS:
1%, 2%, 5%, 10%, 16%, 18%, 22%, 25%.
It seemed the more pure of heart they are, the easier it was to hypnotise them.
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10 minutes later Peach was fully hypnotised. The tape and blind-fold were taken off and she was un-chained. Samus' bar was almost full too, now it was at 89%.

When Peach and Samus were both hypnotised, they said together, in a chant:
"WE MUST OBEY LORD FAWFUL
HE'S THE RULER OF OUR MINDS
WE CAN NOT EVEN SAY A WORD
BECAUSE WE ARE HYPNO-TISED!"

Fawful: How kind!
Continuation of Slaves of the Unknown Part 1 ([link]).
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Crudzalot88 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2011
Part 3 is coming, once I can fix my story software...
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mario0027 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2010
plz tell me theres part 3.
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Crudzalot88 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2011
Part 3 is coming, I have to fix my editing software first, so I can make a picture to go along with it.
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mario0027 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2010
AAAAAAAAWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSOOOOOOOMEEEE!!!!!!!!!
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Crudzalot88 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2011
OK, you read part 2, what about part 1?
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